Grayon Brand
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Post by Grayon Brand on Oct 3, 2006 18:57:30 GMT -8
Okay, since most people seemed to want this, here we go! It lost something in translation, but this the first page I made today. I'll make more as I go, but this damn good for me, I think. I normally suck... One final note, the five characters up in the top are only there for the time being. They may change as the story goes on, more may be added, etc. But that will most likely be the format for the title from now on... So, Without Further Ado... Under Fire! |
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Post by Zack Asiv on Oct 3, 2006 23:04:03 GMT -8
Awesome so far, can't wait to see the rest. ;D
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Post by Atticus Wagner on Oct 3, 2006 23:20:55 GMT -8
I just realized that this entire time... I've been calling you Grayson, not Grayon...
Wow...
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Post by jett on Oct 4, 2006 15:45:41 GMT -8
... L.A.?
Why are Chi, Leon, Aureus, Travis and Grayon in L.A.??
... ... umm, yeah, all cool, 'n stuff. Love 'da comic, hope ya' come up with the other part soon. =D
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Grayon Brand
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Post by Grayon Brand on Oct 4, 2006 18:36:29 GMT -8
Because it fits better into my storyline and makes for a better cityscape.
That and the fact that I thought 259 was in L.A.... And I think it should. More delinquents and such.
I have the second page done, but I need to ink it and take a still of it for editting... So about 45% done. ^_^
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Post by Karel on Oct 5, 2006 2:00:54 GMT -8
You're wrong dude. The bad-ass people live in little islands nobody cares about.
Like Hawaii... or something.
Edit: Yes, I phail at humour.
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Post by max on Oct 5, 2006 9:48:35 GMT -8
^^
Well, I <3 it, pretty cool. If it's not too late do you think my character could be in too? If no then that's alright as well, just keep it up ^_^
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Post by Travis Delmonte on Oct 5, 2006 10:17:29 GMT -8
Niice.
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Aureus
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Post by Aureus on Oct 5, 2006 13:13:21 GMT -8
Why is Aureus smiling? O.o
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Post by ag on Oct 5, 2006 13:27:31 GMT -8
Why is Aureus smiling? O.o He's smiling in glee that he got to be in the comic... Edit: Oh right, I liked the art work by the way, keep up the good work. |
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Post by Grayon Brand on Oct 5, 2006 17:50:14 GMT -8
Why is Aureus smiling? O.o It's my interperetation of his two personalities. He has a calmer, nicer side (smiling), and a demented, destructive side (the face hard to see to the right of the smiling face). Oh, and Max, I'll see where I can fit you in, in fact, I'm not just going to use those five. In fact, a teacher makes an appearance on the next page, when I get it done. The students will come in after that. The reason those five are up there is... 1- They were the first five to respond. 2- They'll most likely play the major parts in this chapter. 3- I got tired of waiting, and decided to make it. Personally, my favorite to draw was Leon, followed closely by Chi. Why? The bandana and the scarf, I love drawing things like that. ^_^ |
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Post by Aureus on Oct 5, 2006 17:56:28 GMT -8
Why is Aureus smiling? O.o It's my interperetation of his two personalities. He has a calmer, nicer side (smiling), and a demented, destructive side (the face hard to see to the right of the smiling face). Oh, and Max, I'll see where I can fit you in, in fact, I'm not just going to use those five. In fact, a teacher makes an appearance on the next page, when I get it done. The students will come in after that. The reason those five are up there is... 1- They were the first five to respond. 2- They'll most likely play the major parts in this chapter. 3- I got tired of waiting, and decided to make it. Personally, my favorite to draw was Leon, followed closely by Chi. Why? The bandana and the scarf, I love drawing things like that. ^_^ Ah ok, I see it now. Very nice. Keep up teh good work. |
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Post by Grayon Brand on Oct 6, 2006 13:48:45 GMT -8
Under Fire Page 2! Ooooo... I gots the next page done... A new record! Now... to see if anyone can understand wtf is going on in this page before I explain in the third page... Oh! And I also wonder if anyone can guess the man in the suit who got shocked before I reveal his face in the next page as well.... ^_^
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Post by Travis Delmonte on Oct 6, 2006 14:12:56 GMT -8
I'm guessing Faust is the one who shocked someone..
o.o
because of his lightning QI.
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Post by Aureus on Oct 6, 2006 14:23:22 GMT -8
Faust and Asiv?
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