Jayr Byrne

[Jayr Byrne]

To be Filled

[Jayr Byrne]

"No, I don't want to dance with the cookie!"

[Tyr Odinson]

Alrighty, Lets get started here ^_^

Your Qi.

I have a problem with only half of this.

Grants Jayr 1 unblockable/undodgeable attack. Transfers

Charisma into Strength for this attack.

Having an unblockable, undodgeable attack COULD be seen as a form of God modding, and while i wouldn't mind if something like this was used against my characters, it could be a thorn in the future. We'll take that out, and i'll allow the Charisma to strength transference. To make up for the loss of the unblockable undodgeable attack, what if we were to give this lance an ability that plays off the use of its energies.

When marked by the lance, even if so much as a scratch is given, 1/2 of opponents strength is added to your own strength. This can be done ONCE per thread. It will give you a further boost and be really cool when against stronger opponents. Also, as you may know, im cleaning up a lot on Qi, making them more...weak, so to speak. I like the idea of the Lance and Shield and armor, but i'd also like it placed in there that you can only use one at a time, and it takes 2 posts to switch. This will make it more of a strategy move for her, as well as harsher penalties on Qi.

Everything else, i believe, is Correctly distributed.

Bio Approved!

Let me know when you fix your Qi, and i'll approve that for ya. :]

[Tyr Odinson]

Qi is-