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Post by Your Mom~ on Dec 15, 2013 15:34:59 GMT -8
"Of course not, you'd never take them anyway."
She replied, forcibly keeping her calm. She didn't flinch as he stomped toward her, instead keeping her gaze locked on his, frowning slightly.
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If Justice is blind, I will guide her. |
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Post by Mathew Amtrum on Dec 15, 2013 15:41:32 GMT -8
He snorted and moved past her. Making sure to slam his shoulder into her as he did. He didn't want her pity. He didn't want her advice. He just wanted to vent and hurt something or someone. It didn't matter who or what it was that he hurt. As long as he got it out before it caused him to burst and really lose his self control.
If there was nothing else that Olesya had to say to him then he would continue without looking back at her. Until eventually he would fade from view to vent his frustrations on some other poor soul.
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Post by Lucien DeChain on Dec 16, 2013 19:59:43 GMT -8
Thread has been handed in using the Fight Turn-In System.
Olesya: +1 EXP. Your writing style was cohesive and driven by the fight, bringing the best out of Olesya while also allowing her shortcomings to be seen. your fighting style is pretty Qi driven, which I enjoyed because of the (relatively) short period in which Olesya has found control of her Qi. By infusing the Qi into your already established physical fight, without making yourself seem overpowered, you've made a pretty enjoyable piece of writing.
Mathew: +1 EXP. I do enjoy Mathew's fights. You end up seeing more sides of him while he's in the fight than anywhere else, which I find riveting. Your writing style reflects his character of the warrior, and the shift in his emotional state was quite natural. Mathew's fighting style is quite intuitive, and very adaptable. Given the statistical gap between characters, you played your strength well, and didn't give in to the "cannot be hit" trope.
I enjoyed reading this thread.
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