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Post by Kaia Galanos on Jan 31, 2021 10:08:45 GMT -8
Hello my friends!
I'm making this thread to receive feedback on my characters and eventually on Gming (I very rarely do it). So! If you have thoughts on any of my characters, good or bad, please let me know and also give me ideas on how to improve if you can. I try to keep my characters on brand but of course no one's perfect.
So let me know your thoughts on Kaia, Nova, Yanmei, Rose, and eventually Marin.
Also thank you ahead of time for any and all feedback.
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Post by Elias Wyatt on Jan 31, 2021 19:47:39 GMT -8
I enjoy seeing the differences between your characters, because they each seem very distinct from each other. The only one I'm not sure about right now is Nova, and I think that's because we're both kinda feeling out how they are now that they're not being brainwashed anymore.
Kaia's definitely the G.O.A.T. right now, though.
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Post by Kaia Galanos on Feb 1, 2021 11:53:24 GMT -8
Yeah I'm also not super sure about Nova. Didn't spend enough time with her in the old stuff to fully discover who she is minus brainwashing. I'm playing off the fact she's supposed to be pretty chill...but I'll try to consider infusing more of her lingering biases and how much of either parent she's like. Kaia's going through a rollercoaster but I'm interested in seeing if I can get her out of it or if she's going to be the villain I threatened she'd be Thanks for the feedback!
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Post by Mathew Amtrum on Feb 1, 2021 20:41:34 GMT -8
So I am really enjoying how wistful that Yanmei is. Very cute and whimsical, it makes me think a little of the fey. I'm curious to see if that will mirror darker aspects of that trope or not. Or if it's unintentional and I'm just way off!
As for Kaia, as I said before her story is one of the ones I was looking the most forward to seeing played out. I am curious to see how she copes with the current situation and see who emerges out the other side.
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Post by Kaia Galanos on Feb 1, 2021 21:07:05 GMT -8
It was not intentional but that's not to say it is wrong. There are some aspects of her that she's hiding behind an ever cheerful personality, that's for sure.
Kaia's story will get back on track for sure, I've been interested in seeing how her current situations can show a different side of her. Will she change? Will she just end up crankier? Who knows!
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