Post by Mr. Kaar on Jun 8, 2007 22:52:06 GMT -8
Writters Note: This is how it should have ended. Listen to this While you read. And I hope Mahoro and Modero don't mind me using Akira and Jimothy in this.
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Rows and rows, and even more rows of men woman, all wearing black jackets with Lightning symbols on the back of them. All wearing shades and jeans. All looking to one man. One lone figure who wore a white t-shirt and slightly baggy tan cargo shorts. He had red lightning shaped scars all down his right arm. He had four horizontal scars on his right cheek, and four on his neck. He had two identicle scars on his forehead. One over each eye. Inbetween those is a diamond tattoo, with two triangles tilted to fit the two top sides of the diamond an 8th of an inch away. He slowly walked towards the rows of people. He had no smile, no expression except for the one he had when he left the hospital, but he did remember alot of things.
FLASH
"Glad to see you still remember me little buddy. Whats been happening to you of late then..." -Akira
FLASH
"No you won't Leon. And I am not going to fight you. I don't care if I am a Defender we are friends and I have no desire to fight you. Do you acctually have a reasion to figh me? Or is it because I am a Defender? If that is the case then I seriously misjudged your character. You seemed to be better then that... One with reason. Besides you wouldn't want to make Athalia hate you would you? After all that trouble you went through to get us some alone time?
If it would make you feel better tell Mayoko or whoever gave you this order that I have no beef with you guys or that I ran like a coward. Frankly I don't fucking care. but I am not going to fight my friends for no damn reason."-Endrin
FLASH
"Leon, if you have something to do, I respect that and all, but we still need to fix up your wound. I have no idea where you're going, or whatever, but you need to get fixed up first. Come one, let's get you back to the nurse's office..." -Athalia
FLASH
"I'm not going anywhere. So you will understand in due time." -Leon
FLASH
"Who knows what good is anymore? But one thing for sure, if good is merely 'cleaning things up'... At least I know that I can do that much good by cleaning up my own mistakes and becoming stronger as a result... Instead of merely sweeping the ashes of my rebirth under the carpet.
If there is one thing that I admire above all else, it's resiliency. You've came this far only to crack, but you at least survived... At least, for now before you decide on... Whatever it is you're deciding on... I want to stop you, I really do, because I sense a foreboding that I may never see the Leon I truly respect ever again... But I too must persevere. Many have dropped left and right of me, but I keep living for them... Because of a story that I want an epilogue to. A chance for a sequel, a legacy, a legend for the next to continue... Leon... I... Be as it may that you... Say that all you lived for or all that you've carried was a waste...
Be as it may that you say that all you lived for or all that you've carried was a waste... But I will carry your burden--no... I will carry your torch now. A memory, you say? I feared being forgotten for my efforts too at a time, but even so... Let it be that my existence goes up into flames at some point in time. They'll never amount to nothing, for ashes will be left in its stead...
And I will let them scatter to the winds instead of confining them beneath some tapestry..."-Celeste
FLASH
"... Hey... do you always sneak up on people like this?... Or you just felt like being my guardian angel watching over me?..." -Eurydice
FLASH
Kentler… Lin… Both names are freakishly familiar to me…
-- I could’ve bet anything that I had heard Leon speak those names before. All I had to do was rack my brain for a while, and it would make even more sense. But on top of what was new news to me, he had all the pain and suffering from this city piled on top of losing a loved one. I envied Leon. If some how I was put in his position, I wouldn’t have had the strength to go on. I would’ve killed myself. I brought my head up. I spoke no words, but looked at Leon. In my eyes was sorrow and pity. I was sorry that Leon had to go through all of that. Eyes can say as much as the mouth can, and even more. -Saito
FLASH
"Look at you, Leon. The only person I both fear and respect at the same time, and you're giving up already. Don't give up, I'm not going to let you. Give up, and you'll soon lose the very person you've become. Keep on fighting, and I'll fight with you. Remember, I'm by your side until the end." - Valo
FLASH END
"Leon. I am Leon, The Bold Lion. I am a good person, I am a protector, and I will always be there. Just not in a physical sense."
The blondes mind had spoken these words out loud, but only loud enough for himself to understand. His hair spiked up as usuel and his deep dark blue eyes fell apon the crowed of people holding weapons, or anticipating there chance to take Leon down. He raised his head from his walk and looked at the first row of people. There numbers surpassed what he knew there to be in the Lightning gang, but he had been gone for some time. Now he was in Texas and taking them on at there home base, but in the streets. They would usuelly have guns at this point, but they where not out to kill Leon. Leon was out to die.
Those eyes of his scarring some of the people even through there false sense of security in numbers. The Lion boys heart had been racing so fast he did not notice the halucinations of his dead friends to have appeared next to him lined up and ready to fight along side him once more. To his right the tall and powerful Akira Kaito, Leon's half brother, and to his left was Jimothy Clavish and Blaze Sudeki. Jimothy his best friend and most valued allie ever, and Blaze, the boy he picked up and taught to fight and shoot in the lightning gang, and was killed in a gang related incident.
The eyes shifted to both his sides and looked to his smiling friends as they looked back to him. Akira giving a nod of his head, Jimothy nodding , and Blaze with that ever there blue bandana in a head nod. They all got into a fighting stance of sorts at the exact same time. This caught the first wave off gaurd. Leon was all they saw and then, Leon charged. A single tear dropped from his right eye as he got within striking distance of the first person. He realized he may never see Eury again.
"Sorry, Eury."
His entire life, or his entire renewed life at 552 flashed before his eyes, from the first time he stepped foot into the school and faught vetis, to the time he was carried out by the ambulence from fighting Ark. And then to the conversation with Celeste with Saito and Valo there. He felt sorry he could not say goodbye, but he couldn't. Not to them directly.
Today would be the last day anyone ever saw the man Leon Sudeki ever again.
They say at that battle, you could hear four people yelling in the charge.
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This is a direct copy and paste from the best thing I have ever written, how Leon should of ended. Or end, whatever, at the time Leon was gone. Like deleted.
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Rows and rows, and even more rows of men woman, all wearing black jackets with Lightning symbols on the back of them. All wearing shades and jeans. All looking to one man. One lone figure who wore a white t-shirt and slightly baggy tan cargo shorts. He had red lightning shaped scars all down his right arm. He had four horizontal scars on his right cheek, and four on his neck. He had two identicle scars on his forehead. One over each eye. Inbetween those is a diamond tattoo, with two triangles tilted to fit the two top sides of the diamond an 8th of an inch away. He slowly walked towards the rows of people. He had no smile, no expression except for the one he had when he left the hospital, but he did remember alot of things.
FLASH
"Glad to see you still remember me little buddy. Whats been happening to you of late then..." -Akira
FLASH
"No you won't Leon. And I am not going to fight you. I don't care if I am a Defender we are friends and I have no desire to fight you. Do you acctually have a reasion to figh me? Or is it because I am a Defender? If that is the case then I seriously misjudged your character. You seemed to be better then that... One with reason. Besides you wouldn't want to make Athalia hate you would you? After all that trouble you went through to get us some alone time?
If it would make you feel better tell Mayoko or whoever gave you this order that I have no beef with you guys or that I ran like a coward. Frankly I don't fucking care. but I am not going to fight my friends for no damn reason."-Endrin
FLASH
"Leon, if you have something to do, I respect that and all, but we still need to fix up your wound. I have no idea where you're going, or whatever, but you need to get fixed up first. Come one, let's get you back to the nurse's office..." -Athalia
FLASH
"I'm not going anywhere. So you will understand in due time." -Leon
FLASH
"Who knows what good is anymore? But one thing for sure, if good is merely 'cleaning things up'... At least I know that I can do that much good by cleaning up my own mistakes and becoming stronger as a result... Instead of merely sweeping the ashes of my rebirth under the carpet.
If there is one thing that I admire above all else, it's resiliency. You've came this far only to crack, but you at least survived... At least, for now before you decide on... Whatever it is you're deciding on... I want to stop you, I really do, because I sense a foreboding that I may never see the Leon I truly respect ever again... But I too must persevere. Many have dropped left and right of me, but I keep living for them... Because of a story that I want an epilogue to. A chance for a sequel, a legacy, a legend for the next to continue... Leon... I... Be as it may that you... Say that all you lived for or all that you've carried was a waste...
Be as it may that you say that all you lived for or all that you've carried was a waste... But I will carry your burden--no... I will carry your torch now. A memory, you say? I feared being forgotten for my efforts too at a time, but even so... Let it be that my existence goes up into flames at some point in time. They'll never amount to nothing, for ashes will be left in its stead...
And I will let them scatter to the winds instead of confining them beneath some tapestry..."-Celeste
FLASH
"... Hey... do you always sneak up on people like this?... Or you just felt like being my guardian angel watching over me?..." -Eurydice
FLASH
Kentler… Lin… Both names are freakishly familiar to me…
-- I could’ve bet anything that I had heard Leon speak those names before. All I had to do was rack my brain for a while, and it would make even more sense. But on top of what was new news to me, he had all the pain and suffering from this city piled on top of losing a loved one. I envied Leon. If some how I was put in his position, I wouldn’t have had the strength to go on. I would’ve killed myself. I brought my head up. I spoke no words, but looked at Leon. In my eyes was sorrow and pity. I was sorry that Leon had to go through all of that. Eyes can say as much as the mouth can, and even more. -Saito
FLASH
"Look at you, Leon. The only person I both fear and respect at the same time, and you're giving up already. Don't give up, I'm not going to let you. Give up, and you'll soon lose the very person you've become. Keep on fighting, and I'll fight with you. Remember, I'm by your side until the end." - Valo
FLASH END
"Leon. I am Leon, The Bold Lion. I am a good person, I am a protector, and I will always be there. Just not in a physical sense."
The blondes mind had spoken these words out loud, but only loud enough for himself to understand. His hair spiked up as usuel and his deep dark blue eyes fell apon the crowed of people holding weapons, or anticipating there chance to take Leon down. He raised his head from his walk and looked at the first row of people. There numbers surpassed what he knew there to be in the Lightning gang, but he had been gone for some time. Now he was in Texas and taking them on at there home base, but in the streets. They would usuelly have guns at this point, but they where not out to kill Leon. Leon was out to die.
Those eyes of his scarring some of the people even through there false sense of security in numbers. The Lion boys heart had been racing so fast he did not notice the halucinations of his dead friends to have appeared next to him lined up and ready to fight along side him once more. To his right the tall and powerful Akira Kaito, Leon's half brother, and to his left was Jimothy Clavish and Blaze Sudeki. Jimothy his best friend and most valued allie ever, and Blaze, the boy he picked up and taught to fight and shoot in the lightning gang, and was killed in a gang related incident.
The eyes shifted to both his sides and looked to his smiling friends as they looked back to him. Akira giving a nod of his head, Jimothy nodding , and Blaze with that ever there blue bandana in a head nod. They all got into a fighting stance of sorts at the exact same time. This caught the first wave off gaurd. Leon was all they saw and then, Leon charged. A single tear dropped from his right eye as he got within striking distance of the first person. He realized he may never see Eury again.
"Sorry, Eury."
His entire life, or his entire renewed life at 552 flashed before his eyes, from the first time he stepped foot into the school and faught vetis, to the time he was carried out by the ambulence from fighting Ark. And then to the conversation with Celeste with Saito and Valo there. He felt sorry he could not say goodbye, but he couldn't. Not to them directly.
Today would be the last day anyone ever saw the man Leon Sudeki ever again.
They say at that battle, you could hear four people yelling in the charge.
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This is a direct copy and paste from the best thing I have ever written, how Leon should of ended. Or end, whatever, at the time Leon was gone. Like deleted.
