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Post by Zack Asiv on Jul 19, 2007 9:11:59 GMT -8
Ring 1
Wire Metal (1/2 lbs): $200
Sheet Metal (1 lbs): $350
Customization: $3,000
Ring 2
Wire Metal (1/2 lbs): $200
Sheet Metal (1 lbs): $350
Customization: $2,500
Total: 6,600
Remaining: 81
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Post by The New Student Dean on Aug 15, 2007 14:24:43 GMT -8
Destructive Cloud
[Materials: 1x Wire Metal, 1x Sheet Metal, Customization ($3000)] -"Forged on the peak of Mount Hua Shan, Taoist mountain of the west, in the Shanxi province, a thin piece of metal was smithed over and over again in a searing heat of a nigh eternal furnace that the mysterious smith would never let out of the fire, until the metal itself burned red. To cool it, the smith went out, into a storm that was circling up overhead, as the rain poured down, violently. Lighting etching itself across the sky. And here, the smith made the firstborn. "...Your name shall be Destructive Cloud, my young one. Know that your birth started when nature itself, with all its finesse struck down at the earth itself in what can only be described as beautiful violence."
-Huo Yuanjia was a Chinese fighter in 1913. He defied an entire nation and brought glory and honor to Asia again. America called Chinese people the "Sick men of Asia" because of how they lived. Broke and lost of their own culture. There was a tournament held for the united nations. Their best fighters against Yuanjia. Huo Yuanjia's student who was sent to Japan came back for the funeral and found out he was poisoned. He got revenge on the Japanese consulate that poisoned him. And took up Yuanjia's name after he was supposedly "Killed" for his murders. Thats Asiv's grandfather. And that, is where our story begins.
-Huo Yuanjia was a righteous man, who never let his pride take hold of him. In accordance to his master's teachings, he himself had become a masterful student. With these rings he forged, he wore them constantly, noting the red, for the murders on his hands, and for the murder of his master. To this end, he took to letting his Qi work, utilizing the ring itself, 'til it became a part of him. Blowing money out of the hands of greedy vendors into the hands of those who were homeless, it was said the town he lived in was very balanced. Yet no one knew of the master behind this. Except for his son.
-Giving death to his mother brought woe to both father and son. And right away, a terrible scar was stricken into their minds. The son had less control over himself, and had no patience to practice his father's style. But he got into fights daily. And never lost. Resentment grew, as the young man grew into his early twenties, on why the old man kept the powers so secret, when he could become rich, wealthy, and above all, powerful. A power, he dreamed, that could've been used to save mother.
-In the dead of night, the son stole into his father's room, and took the rings for his own, without his father ever knowing, and fled the town in the night. And it was to this end, that his own Qi had awakened. Bitter flames of hatred, determined to obtain more power, his fire Qi was first used in conjunction with the ring to kill the police who found him, wanting to bring him back home. They were enveloped in flames, that were so gloriously desirable to him, that he continued to use it. Even to the day that he had sons of his own. The father never tried to contact his lost son. Too bitter, to sad.
-The Yuanjia family name became distorted within the son's names, with his own sons. Training his eldest to become a true master, a fighter stronger than Huo Yuanjia, he cast a sour look upon his youngest son, who held ideals of the old man. Almost a spitting image. But with a less fortunate upbringing. Spiting what might be the spitting image of his old man, the son taught the boy his own values, but never ceased in letting the eldest son fight with him. Praising his eldest son as a God, quick as lightning. While his pathetic younger son was nothing. He had succeeded...
-....Or so he would've liked to believe. One day, as the eldest son was out, the young boy came with a vengeance, his emotion peaking. No longer possible of becoming his grandfather's image of righteousness, but determined at the same time not to fall to such depths as his greedy, power-mongering father. Utilizing his own skill, the boy's Qi awakened. And he found that he was strong. Forming a cloud of destruction about himself, as the crooked son of the Elder Yuanjia attempted to use a firestorm, it ended in an explosion. Obliterating the house, obliterating the crooked man. But leaving behind the rings.
-A destruction cloud... fitting, as it was the name of the firstborn ring. And so, the boy had a 'first born' skill. And with his own Qi igniting with the rings... their formation of the true Yuanjia line had been complete, instead of falling into the half-brother's hands. Despising the name of the name of his father, the son, not knowing of his grandfather, took to his own path. Changed his name from Yuanjia to Asiv. And in his own end? Had become the last of the Yuanjia line to truly influence the rings.
-Weighing 1.5 lbs, this ring is relatively light, and won't take too much training to get used to it, physically.
-The powers within this particular ring have been passed down from generation to generation in the Yuanjia bloodline. Do not take them lightly.
-Dion Regen is the last known of the Yuanjia family who is physically capable of granting the rings one final gift of his own Qi. Which.. if this were to happen, would complete the bloodline, unless Dion were to have offspring of his own.- Beginner Level: Default- Reserved For Power
- Wielder receives ? Constitution, ? Wisdom, ? Charisma.
- The ring is not too heavy. At all. But it calls for a person to have great strength, finesse of the Gods, and the knowledge to properly place it upon the users fingers. Any less would be a dishonor to it.
-Novice Level: Requires 26 Constitution, 21 Intelligence, 22 Wisdom.
- Wielder receives a 1.7x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Wielder receives
-6 -4 Constitution, -10 -7 Strength, -7 -5 Dexterity.
- Wielder is still getting used to the gauntlets, but at this level, can use it a little more effectively.
-Pro Level: Requires 27 Constitution, 23 Intelligence, 24 Wisdom.
- Wielder receives a 2.0x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Wielder receives
-2 -1 Constitution, -2 -1 Strength, -2 -1 Dexterity.
- Wielder has come to the point where, while it still may slow him down, he is beginning to reap the rewards of the fruits of his labor.
- Wielder is now able to punch into wooden materials and not suffer damage to his bones from shock.
-Advanced Level: Requires 26 Intelligence, 27 Wisdom.
- Wielder receives a 2.1x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Wielder receives
+2 +3 Constitution, +4 +5 Strength, +1 Dexterity.
- The Wielder can now pull out the potential of his gauntlets, and use it with little impediment.
-Master Level: Requires 33 Wisdom, 34 Intelligence.
- Wielder receives a 2.3x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Wielder receives
+13 +17 Constitution, +20 26 Strength, +10 +13 Dexterity.
- Having unlocked the full potential of the gauntlets, the user can now move with absolute freedom.
- Wielder is now able to punch into concrete and not suffer damage to his fists.
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Post by Mathew Amtrum on Jul 15, 2008 10:42:29 GMT -8
Raging Torrent
[Materials: 1x Wire Metal, 1x Sheet Metal, Customization ($2500)] - Beginner Level: Default- Weider can make a strike once a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder receives -
25 18 Constitution, -20 14 Strength, -22 15 Dexterity.
-Novice Level: Requires 26 Charisma, 21 Intelligence, 22 Wisdom.
- Weider can make a strike twice a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder receives -
12 8 Constitution, -10 7 Strength, -11 8 Dexterity.
-Pro Level: Requires 27 Charisma, 23 Intelligence, 24 Wisdom.
- Weider can make a strike three times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder receives -
6 4 Constitution, -5 4 Strength, -6 4 Dexterity.
- Wielder has come to the point where, while it still may slow him down, he is beginning to reap the rewards of the fruits of his labor.
-Advanced Level: Requires 26 Intelligence, 27 Wisdom.
- Weider can make a strike four times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder receives +
2 3 Constitution, +4 5 Strength, +3 4 Dexterity.
-Master Level: Requires 33 Wisdom, 40 Charisma, 34 Intelligence.
- Weider can make a strike five times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder receives +
28 36 Constitution, +25 33 Strength, +26 34 Dexterity.
- Having unlocked the full potential of the gauntlets, the user can now move with absolute freedom.
Note to staff: Since it was not specified how customization was to be distributed 1k went to penalties and benefit modifications and 1.5k went to powers. Thus this power is level 2.
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Post by Quest Character on Nov 22, 2009 23:56:34 GMT -8
Finished Products unless Mikey finds any misdemeanors
Destructive Cloud
[Materials: 1x Wire Metal, 1x Sheet Metal, Customization ($3000) --"Forged on the peak of Mount Hua Shan, Taoist mountain of the west, in the Shanxi province, a thin piece of metal was smithed over and over again in a searing heat of a nigh eternal furnace that the mysterious smith would never let out of the fire, until the metal itself burned red. To cool it, the smith went out, into a storm that was circling up overhead, as the rain poured down, violently. Lighting etching itself across the sky. And here, the smith made the firstborn. "...Your name shall be Destructive Cloud, my young one. Know that your birth started when nature itself, with all its finesse struck down at the earth itself in what can only be described as beautiful violence."
-Huo Yuanjia was a Chinese fighter in 1913. He defied an entire nation and brought glory and honor to Asia again. America called Chinese people the "Sick men of Asia" because of how they lived. Broke and lost of their own culture. There was a tournament held for the united nations. Their best fighters against Yuanjia. Huo Yuanjia's student who was sent to Japan came back for the funeral and found out he was poisoned. He got revenge on the Japanese consulate that poisoned him. And took up Yuanjia's name after he was supposedly "Killed" for his murders. Thats Asiv's grandfather. And that, is where our story begins.
-Huo Yuanjia was a righteous man, who never let his pride take hold of him. In accordance to his master's teachings, he himself had become a masterful student. With these rings he forged, he wore them constantly, noting the red, for the murders on his hands, and for the murder of his master. To this end, he took to letting his Qi work, utilizing the ring itself, 'til it became a part of him. Blowing money out of the hands of greedy vendors into the hands of those who were homeless, it was said the town he lived in was very balanced. Yet no one knew of the master behind this. Except for his son.
-Giving death to his mother brought woe to both father and son. And right away, a terrible scar was stricken into their minds. The son had less control over himself, and had no patience to practice his father's style. But he got into fights daily. And never lost. Resentment grew, as the young man grew into his early twenties, on why the old man kept the powers so secret, when he could become rich, wealthy, and above all, powerful. A power, he dreamed, that could've been used to save mother.
-In the dead of night, the son stole into his father's room, and took the rings for his own, without his father ever knowing, and fled the town in the night. And it was to this end, that his own Qi had awakened. Bitter flames of hatred, determined to obtain more power, his fire Qi was first used in conjunction with the ring to kill the police who found him, wanting to bring him back home. They were enveloped in flames, that were so gloriously desirable to him, that he continued to use it. Even to the day that he had sons of his own. The father never tried to contact his lost son. Too bitter, to sad.
-The Yuanjia family name became distorted within the son's names, with his own sons. Training his eldest to become a true master, a fighter stronger than Huo Yuanjia, he cast a sour look upon his youngest son, who held ideals of the old man. Almost a spitting image. But with a less fortunate upbringing. Spiting what might be the spitting image of his old man, the son taught the boy his own values, but never ceased in letting the eldest son fight with him. Praising his eldest son as a God, quick as lightning. While his pathetic younger son was nothing. He had succeeded...
-....Or so he would've liked to believe. One day, as the eldest son was out, the young boy came with a vengeance, his emotion peaking. No longer possible of becoming his grandfather's image of righteousness, but determined at the same time not to fall to such depths as his greedy, power-mongering father. Utilizing his own skill, the boy's Qi awakened. And he found that he was strong. Forming a cloud of destruction about himself, as the crooked son of the Elder Yuanjia attempted to use a firestorm, it ended in an explosion. Obliterating the house, obliterating the crooked man. But leaving behind the rings.
-Weighing 1.5 lbs, this ring is relatively light, and won't take too much training to get used to it, physically.
-The powers within this particular ring have been passed down from generation to generation in the Yuanjia bloodline. Do not take them lightly.
-Dion Regen is the last known of the Yuanjia family who is physically capable of granting the rings one final gift of his own Qi. Which.. if this were to happen, would complete the bloodline, unless Dion were to have offspring of his own.
-$1500 money has been used to refine the the artifact, to allow for easier 'adaptability' to its new owner (45% Slash On All Penalties And 45% Increase On All Benefits, Powers Aside), while not taking away from its ability.
-A destruction cloud... fitting, as it was the name of the firstborn ring. And so, the boy had a 'first born' skill. And with his own Qi igniting with the rings... their formation of the true Yuanjia line had been complete, instead of falling into the half-brother's hands. Despising the name of the name of his father, the son, not knowing of his grandfather, took to his own path. Changed his name from Yuanjia to Asiv. And in his own end? Had become the last of the Yuanjia line to truly influence the rings. *LOCKED* [Total Investment: $0/$1500/$3000/$4500]
- Beginner Level: Default- Power 1: Wielder receives a 1.1x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Wielder receives a 1.2x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 2: Wielder receives a 1.3x bonus to Strength in punching.
[/s][/li][/ul] - Wielder Receives
-10 -5 Constitution, -7 -3 Strength, -4 -2 Dexterity.
- The ring is not too heavy. At all. But it calls for a person to have great strength, finesse of the Gods, and the knowledge to properly place it upon the users fingers. Any less would be a dishonor to it.
- Novice Level: Requires 54 Constitution, 31 Intelligence, 49 Wisdom.- Power 1: Wielder receives a 1.2x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Wielder receives a 1.3x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 2: Wielder receives a 1.4x bonus to Strength in punching.
[/s][/li][/ul] - Wielder Receives
-6 -3 Constitution, -4 -2 Strength, -2 -1 Dexterity.
- The ring is feeling a bit more cozy there, reguardless it still holds a certain bit of discomfort. Weildin it to it's fullest requires full potential.
- Pro Level: Requires 59 Constitution, 34 Intelligence, 54 Wisdom.- Power 1: Wielder receives a 1.3x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Wielder receives a 1.4x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 2: Wielder receives a 1.5x bonus to Strength in punching.
[/s][/li][/ul] - Wielder Receives
-2 -1 Constitution, -1 -1 Strength, -1 -1 Dexterity.
- The ring is at the point where its bearer hardly notices it's presence aside from weilding it's abilities and controlling those additional harnessed abilities.
- Advanced Level: Requires 68 Constitution, 39 Intelligence, 62 Wisdom.- Power 1: Wielder receives a 1.4x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Wielder receives a 1.5x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 2: Wielder receives a 1.6x bonus to Strength in punching.
[/s][/li][/ul] - Wielder Receives
+13 +19 Constitution, +9 +13 Strength, +5 +7 Dexterity.
- The ring has grown upon you and with it enveloped a sense of worth and esteem, wear it proudly and with it power shall come down upon you.
- Master Level: Requires 82 Constitution, 47 Intelligence, 74 Wisdom.- Power 1: Wielder receives a 1.5x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Wielder receives a 1.6x bonus to Strength in punching.
- Power 1 Upgrade 2: Wielder receives a 1.7x bonus to Strength in punching.
[/s][/li][/ul] - Wielder Receives
+18 +26 Constitution, +12 +17 Strength, +7 +10 Dexterity.
- At this point, you posses the powers of a God, you're channeled energies through the ring go unparralleled might as well engrave "YOU LOSE!" on the ring so that everyone knows after that first punch they've lost.
Raging Torrent
[Materials: 1x Wire Metal, 1x Sheet Metal, Customization ($2500) --"Forged on the peak of Mount Hua Shan, Taoist mountain of the west, in the Shanxi province, a thin piece of metal was smithed over and over again in a searing heat of a nigh eternal furnace that the mysterious smith would never let out of the fire, until the metal itself burned red. To cool it, the smith went out, into a storm that was circling up overhead, as the rain poured down, violently. Lighting etching itself across the sky. And here, the smith made the firstborn. "...Your name shall be Destructive Cloud, my young one. Know that your birth started when nature itself, with all its finesse struck down at the earth itself in what can only be described as beautiful violence."
-Huo Yuanjia was a Chinese fighter in 1913. He defied an entire nation and brought glory and honor to Asia again. America called Chinese people the "Sick men of Asia" because of how they lived. Broke and lost of their own culture. There was a tournament held for the united nations. Their best fighters against Yuanjia. Huo Yuanjia's student who was sent to Japan came back for the funeral and found out he was poisoned. He got revenge on the Japanese consulate that poisoned him. And took up Yuanjia's name after he was supposedly "Killed" for his murders. Thats Asiv's grandfather. And that, is where our story begins.
-Huo Yuanjia was a righteous man, who never let his pride take hold of him. In accordance to his master's teachings, he himself had become a masterful student. With these rings he forged, he wore them constantly, noting the red, for the murders on his hands, and for the murder of his master. To this end, he took to letting his Qi work, utilizing the ring itself, 'til it became a part of him. Blowing money out of the hands of greedy vendors into the hands of those who were homeless, it was said the town he lived in was very balanced. Yet no one knew of the master behind this. Except for his son.
-Giving death to his mother brought woe to both father and son. And right away, a terrible scar was stricken into their minds. The son had less control over himself, and had no patience to practice his father's style. But he got into fights daily. And never lost. Resentment grew, as the young man grew into his early twenties, on why the old man kept the powers so secret, when he could become rich, wealthy, and above all, powerful. A power, he dreamed, that could've been used to save mother.
-In the dead of night, the son stole into his father's room, and took the rings for his own, without his father ever knowing, and fled the town in the night. And it was to this end, that his own Qi had awakened. Bitter flames of hatred, determined to obtain more power, his fire Qi was first used in conjunction with the ring to kill the police who found him, wanting to bring him back home. They were enveloped in flames, that were so gloriously desirable to him, that he continued to use it. Even to the day that he had sons of his own. The father never tried to contact his lost son. Too bitter, to sad.
-The Yuanjia family name became distorted within the son's names, with his own sons. Training his eldest to become a true master, a fighter stronger than Huo Yuanjia, he cast a sour look upon his youngest son, who held ideals of the old man. Almost a spitting image. But with a less fortunate upbringing. Spiting what might be the spitting image of his old man, the son taught the boy his own values, but never ceased in letting the eldest son fight with him. Praising his eldest son as a God, quick as lightning. While his pathetic younger son was nothing. He had succeeded...
-....Or so he would've liked to believe. One day, as the eldest son was out, the young boy came with a vengeance, his emotion peaking. No longer possible of becoming his grandfather's image of righteousness, but determined at the same time not to fall to such depths as his greedy, power-mongering father. Utilizing his own skill, the boy's Qi awakened. And he found that he was strong. Forming a cloud of destruction about himself, as the crooked son of the Elder Yuanjia attempted to use a firestorm, it ended in an explosion. Obliterating the house, obliterating the crooked man. But leaving behind the rings.
-Weighing 1.5 lbs, this ring is relatively light, and won't take too much training to get used to it, physically.
-The powers within this particular ring have been passed down from generation to generation in the Yuanjia bloodline. Do not take them lightly.
-Dion Regen is the last known of the Yuanjia family who is physically capable of granting the rings one final gift of his own Qi. Which.. if this were to happen, would complete the bloodline, unless Dion were to have offspring of his own.
-$1000 money has been used to refine the the artifact, to allow for easier 'adaptability' to its new owner (30% Slash On All Penalties And 30% Increase On All Benefits, Powers Aside), while not taking away from its ability.
-A Raging Torrent... fitting, as it was the name of the firstborn ring. And so, the boy had a 'first born' skill. And with his own Qi igniting with the rings... their formation of the true Yuanjia line had been complete, instead of falling into the half-brother's hands. Despising the name of the name of his father, the son, not knowing of his grandfather, took to his own path. Changed his name from Yuanjia to Asiv. And in his own end? Had become the last of the Yuanjia line to truly influence the rings. *LOCKED* [Total Investment: $0/$500/$1000/$2500]
- Beginner Level: DefaultPower 1: Weider can make a strike once a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Weider can make a strike twice a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
Power 1 Upgrade 2: Weider can make a strike three times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder Receives
-10 -5 Constitution, -7 -3 Strength, -4 -2 Dexterity.
- The ring is not too heavy. At all. But it calls for a person to have great strength, finesse of the Gods, and the knowledge to properly place it upon the users fingers. Any less would be a dishonor to it.
- Novice Level: Requires 28 Charisma, 31 Intelligence, 49 Wisdom.Power 1: Weider can make a strike twice a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Weider can make a strike three times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
Power 1 Upgrade 2: Weider can make a strike four times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder Receives
-6 -3 Constitution, -4 -2 Strength, -2 -1 Dexterity.
- The ring is feeling a bit more cozy there, reguardless it still holds a certain bit of discomfort. Weildin it to it's fullest requires full potential.
- Pro Level: Requires 31 Charisma, 34 Intelligence, 54 Wisdom.Power 1: Weider can make a strike three times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Weider can make a strike four times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
Power 1 Upgrade 2: Weider can make a strike five times a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder Receives
-2 -1 Constitution, -1 -1 Strength, -1 -1 Dexterity.
- The ring is at the point where its bearer hardly notices it's presence aside from weilding it's abilities and controlling those additional harnessed abilities.
- Advanced Level: Requires 36 Charisma, 39 Intelligence, 62 Wisdom.Power 1: Weider can make a strike four a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Weider can make a strike five a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
Power 1 Upgrade 2: Weider can make a strike six a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder Receives
+13 +17 Constitution, +9 +12 Strength, +5 +7 Dexterity.
- The ring has grown upon you and with it enveloped a sense of worth and esteem, wear it proudly and with it power shall come down upon you.
- Master Level: Requires 43 Charisma, 47 Intelligence, 74 Wisdom.Power 1: Weider can make a strike five a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Power 1 Upgrade 1: Weider can make a strike six a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
Power 1 Upgrade 2: Weider can make a strike seven a day to stun his opponent for a single post.
- Wielder Receives
+18 +23 Constitution, +12 +16 Strength, +7 +9 Dexterity.
- At this point, you posses the powers of a God, you're channeled energies through the ring go unparralleled might as well engrave "YOU LOSE!" on the ring so that everyone knows after that first punch they've lost.
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