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Post by seishounohana on Jul 8, 2007 19:21:35 GMT -8
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Post by seishounohana on Jul 10, 2007 20:20:29 GMT -8
Perhaps use something else. Like say. Using the radiant heat which comes off the body, only increasing it just as it exits, this way it can be prevented from harming you as skin CAN adapt to higher temperatures. A better idea! HOMG -huggles- -edits- <3
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Post by seishounohana on Jul 13, 2007 15:54:45 GMT -8
I just hope my fighting style ISN'T too magic-ish... >.<
I'm worrying...
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Post by meigan on Jul 13, 2007 17:06:37 GMT -8
I agree with Hiroko, but it looks good to me. The only thing I find a bit confusing is that her fighting style uses wind, but her qi uses fire. If her fighting style focuses on the wind element, I would suggest that her Qi would be around the wind element as well...playing to your strengths and all. But that's just me. And as far as Qi goes, I would suggest coming up with a series of levels from novice to master, indicating the potency of her attacks as she learns them with her Qi. It can help with your character development, and keep yourself in check as well if you're worring about being too 'magicy' right off the bat. It's fine as it is, I like it (very detailed, muy bien), these are just my suggestions <3 ^_~
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Post by seishounohana on Jul 14, 2007 3:05:03 GMT -8
Ah, I see. I've yet to make a more detailed thing about Emily's Qi actually.
I've been seeing multi-leveled Qi around too... soo... yeah. I'll put it up by tomorrow ^^v
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