mambo
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Mambo
Nov 24, 2007 17:13:15 GMT -8
Post by mambo on Nov 24, 2007 17:13:15 GMT -8
Basic Information
Name: Nathan Smith Age: 17 Height: 6.0 Weight: 120 lbs Blood Type: AB Gender: Male Sexuality: Heterosexual Eye Color: Icy Blue Hair Color: Black
Pass Time Information
Hobbies: None currently. Talents: None currently. Favorite things: None currently.
Mental Information
Personality: OutGoing Hard And Fun To Be With . Mentality: Sane Ideal: None currently. Belief: Christian
Physical Information
Build: Strong. Head: Oval-shaped. Arms: Long and Strong. Legs: Long, obviously. Feet: Massive Sized 13 .
Apparel Information
Head Gear: Nothing Really A Ood Hat Some Times Shirts: Mostly Short Sleved Tops Pants: Mostly A Lot Of Money Worth Of Jeans Shoes: I Have Diffremt Types Of Shoes From Nike To Locost.
Fighting Information
Fighting Stlye: Ninja Traning And Kon Fu Years Practiced: Since I Was 6 Description of style: I Fight In The Style Of Bruce Lee And Many More
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Mambo
Dec 2, 2007 12:32:37 GMT -8
Post by meigan on Dec 2, 2007 12:32:37 GMT -8
Allllright. Just a couple things before I can approve you: *History- I don't see one, and you probably should have one. A description of your characters childhood, where did he come from? Who were his parents? Why did he decide to go to PHS 259? The purpose of a history is to help you develop your character and for other players to know a little bit about them as well. *Fighting Style- Ninja Training and Kung Fu? Why did they chose this? Does it have to do with their HISTORY? Why did they start at such a young age? What are their specialties? (Weapons, hand to hand, stealth). Your description is also lacking slightly because even though his style may be like Bruce Lee and "Many More", people may not understand how Bruce Lee fights. A description would help greatly especially if you're thinking about fighting on this board. *Stats- Theyre incorrect..sorry. For a freshman you have a total of 90 stat points to arrange in any manner you choose, and right now you only have 30 distributed. Feel free to ask a staff member if you are having trouble with this. *Spelling- Okay, so it's not a requirement to spell everything correctly, and I may just be a bit of a nazi, but if you're running Mozilla Firefox, if you type something incorrectly it will be underlined in red, and you can just right click it and select the correct spelling. Because this board is based on written roleplaying, it is good to get into the habit of good spelling if not for the board for your own education and intelligence. If you have any questions feel free to PM me or im me at retrolemonpop (aim) or originalitystolen@hotmail.com (msn)
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