Post by Gilgamesh Magnius on Oct 6, 2009 12:17:02 GMT -8
Their will be 5 chapters, maybe more if i find people enjoy this.
Their will be multiple posts, after a post(s) feel free to comment all you please.
Year 20 BBY (Before the Battle of Yavin)
This is the tale of CC:503 (Clone Commander.)
Chapter 1- To the Bridge!
503 was a clone commander in the 803rd legion, mainly used in during the Clone Wars as the First and most successful wave of attack the fleets and ground forces, they were elites, they were the best, they used ARC (Advanced Recon Commandos) to train the troops, the ARC troopers were the best of the best.
503 awoke in a white room. He sat up and shook his head. He was on a Republic Flag ship called “Inevitable” 503 looked at his armor.
It was like a normal Clone Troopers shape, but had more to it.
Their was black paint on it and 20 blaster shots, he lived through them and he sighed, stood up, he looked at his troops, they were gone.
Had he over slept? No.. it was early. He heard a shot, a blaster shot, Gun fire?
503 got up, put his armor on and grabbed his rifle and his pistols and he put them in holsters on his sides, he opened the door to
see a mix of Clone troopers, his men.. on the ground and Driods, they were boarded?
503 rolled by the gun fire and behind a pillar and started to blind fire at the red blaster fire, the droids.
He heard the fire stop.
“Commander!” A clone trooper ran over and kneeled beside him.
“Clone Trooper:309 reporting.”
503 got up and looked at 309. “What’s the status?” he asked him.
“We have 3 breaches, One in our south hanger, one in the north hanger and one close to the bridge.” 309 got up holding his gun
“Alright, get any trooper that can move and shoot and we need to get to the bridge, we need to get to the Jedi as fast as we can.” 503 replied and handed the trooper his rifle and took out his pistols. “Now move!”
“YES SIR!” 3 clones replied and ran behind 503.
503 kept running over clone bodies, blaster dents in the walls and droid parts on the ground, the clones followed him.
“Great.. Maybe we are the only 4 left in this hell hole.” 309 said while running, He was holding the Rifle level with his eyes so when he sees a droid or anything, its shoot on sight.
309, 788 and 444 appeared on the squad command on the bottom left hand side of 503’s visor, they didn’t have names, so he decided on giving them nicknames.
“309, your nickname is now.. Rev. 788, yours is Sevan, and 44, yours is Quits.” 503 said, he stopped in the middle of the hall, He heard more gun fire. He put his hand up in a fist which ment to stop.
The clones stopped at his command, Rev was looking backwards just in case if anyone or anything was behind them. They all heard the gun shots, more Clones?
They all ran to the south Hanger, gun shots. They saw some Clones being pinned down, they were ARC troopers in the Hanger Control room. 503 saw Clones and pointed at the crates, they were unbreakable so the squad hid behind them and the squad decided on their own to cover 503 while he goes and helps the ARC.
Rev, Sevan and Quits were behind 3 crates and started to open fire with their weapons at the mass amounts of droids.
“Sevan, Quits! Nads out!” Rev commanded and the other two threw 2 thermal detonators out.
They heard the explosions and the droid parts fly, the clones looked from behind the crates at the droids, they just stood their, firing at them. And the clones shot back.
503 ran up the stairs dodging fire to get to the Control Room, 503 started to look at the ARC’s, nothing, no words from them, they just kept shooting.
“CC-503, get to the Bridge.” ARC-660 said to 503. “Now! Leave these to us.”
503 ran out the door behind him and he just ran to the bridge, the squad command disappeared as he ran and he was at the door of the bridge, bodies and parts everywhere.
503 went in, their were only 3 clones keeping this ship together. They were yelling at the others to get work done and he looked at the Jedi.
“General!” 503 ran over and held his guns at the door, he looked around at the 3 clones.
“Zero, this thing is going down!” the Jedi said. “We need to abandon this place with the LAAT (Low Attitude Air Transport.)
“Roger, the ARC’s are ready to leave, we need to get them.” He replied.
Zero was his nickname, he followed the Jedi through to the hanger, and it was cle-… well filled with destruction but with no enemies. The 3 ARC’s and the 3 squad troops were on the LAAT, the squad troops were in the cockpit of the ship and the others were in the loading area of it and the Jedi and Zero got in, the ship got ready and got into the air, the ship left the Flag Ship, the blast doors closed as they left and a new atmosphere was on the ship, so the Jedi could breath, they watched from a Camera that was on the back of the ship to see the Flag ship explode, they were the only survivors.. and going to a Separatist controlled planet, the Flag ship pieces were falling onto the planet and they watched..
They Clones all sat down and took of the helmets, they all looked alike, in every way.
Rev started to talk.
“Were so done..” He stopped as the ARC started to talk.
“Look, we have no choice, we need to work together down their.”
ARC-545 said “ARC-545 Ion reporting.”
“ARC-660 Telo reporting.” The other one said.
“ARC-567 Flail, reporting in sir.” The last one responded to that.
“You guys.. When we land.. move together, no one goes alone.” The jedi said to them all. He had his cloak on and a light saber in his hand, it wasn’t on, it was off, meaning no blade.
They felt the LAAT Land.
Everyone put their helmets on, only force knows what was waiting for them out there, on the planet.. The planet, Mustafar.
Their will be multiple posts, after a post(s) feel free to comment all you please.
Year 20 BBY (Before the Battle of Yavin)
This is the tale of CC:503 (Clone Commander.)
Chapter 1- To the Bridge!
503 was a clone commander in the 803rd legion, mainly used in during the Clone Wars as the First and most successful wave of attack the fleets and ground forces, they were elites, they were the best, they used ARC (Advanced Recon Commandos) to train the troops, the ARC troopers were the best of the best.
503 awoke in a white room. He sat up and shook his head. He was on a Republic Flag ship called “Inevitable” 503 looked at his armor.
It was like a normal Clone Troopers shape, but had more to it.
Their was black paint on it and 20 blaster shots, he lived through them and he sighed, stood up, he looked at his troops, they were gone.
Had he over slept? No.. it was early. He heard a shot, a blaster shot, Gun fire?
503 got up, put his armor on and grabbed his rifle and his pistols and he put them in holsters on his sides, he opened the door to
see a mix of Clone troopers, his men.. on the ground and Driods, they were boarded?
503 rolled by the gun fire and behind a pillar and started to blind fire at the red blaster fire, the droids.
He heard the fire stop.
“Commander!” A clone trooper ran over and kneeled beside him.
“Clone Trooper:309 reporting.”
503 got up and looked at 309. “What’s the status?” he asked him.
“We have 3 breaches, One in our south hanger, one in the north hanger and one close to the bridge.” 309 got up holding his gun
“Alright, get any trooper that can move and shoot and we need to get to the bridge, we need to get to the Jedi as fast as we can.” 503 replied and handed the trooper his rifle and took out his pistols. “Now move!”
“YES SIR!” 3 clones replied and ran behind 503.
503 kept running over clone bodies, blaster dents in the walls and droid parts on the ground, the clones followed him.
“Great.. Maybe we are the only 4 left in this hell hole.” 309 said while running, He was holding the Rifle level with his eyes so when he sees a droid or anything, its shoot on sight.
309, 788 and 444 appeared on the squad command on the bottom left hand side of 503’s visor, they didn’t have names, so he decided on giving them nicknames.
“309, your nickname is now.. Rev. 788, yours is Sevan, and 44, yours is Quits.” 503 said, he stopped in the middle of the hall, He heard more gun fire. He put his hand up in a fist which ment to stop.
The clones stopped at his command, Rev was looking backwards just in case if anyone or anything was behind them. They all heard the gun shots, more Clones?
They all ran to the south Hanger, gun shots. They saw some Clones being pinned down, they were ARC troopers in the Hanger Control room. 503 saw Clones and pointed at the crates, they were unbreakable so the squad hid behind them and the squad decided on their own to cover 503 while he goes and helps the ARC.
Rev, Sevan and Quits were behind 3 crates and started to open fire with their weapons at the mass amounts of droids.
“Sevan, Quits! Nads out!” Rev commanded and the other two threw 2 thermal detonators out.
They heard the explosions and the droid parts fly, the clones looked from behind the crates at the droids, they just stood their, firing at them. And the clones shot back.
503 ran up the stairs dodging fire to get to the Control Room, 503 started to look at the ARC’s, nothing, no words from them, they just kept shooting.
“CC-503, get to the Bridge.” ARC-660 said to 503. “Now! Leave these to us.”
503 ran out the door behind him and he just ran to the bridge, the squad command disappeared as he ran and he was at the door of the bridge, bodies and parts everywhere.
503 went in, their were only 3 clones keeping this ship together. They were yelling at the others to get work done and he looked at the Jedi.
“General!” 503 ran over and held his guns at the door, he looked around at the 3 clones.
“Zero, this thing is going down!” the Jedi said. “We need to abandon this place with the LAAT (Low Attitude Air Transport.)
“Roger, the ARC’s are ready to leave, we need to get them.” He replied.
Zero was his nickname, he followed the Jedi through to the hanger, and it was cle-… well filled with destruction but with no enemies. The 3 ARC’s and the 3 squad troops were on the LAAT, the squad troops were in the cockpit of the ship and the others were in the loading area of it and the Jedi and Zero got in, the ship got ready and got into the air, the ship left the Flag Ship, the blast doors closed as they left and a new atmosphere was on the ship, so the Jedi could breath, they watched from a Camera that was on the back of the ship to see the Flag ship explode, they were the only survivors.. and going to a Separatist controlled planet, the Flag ship pieces were falling onto the planet and they watched..
They Clones all sat down and took of the helmets, they all looked alike, in every way.
Rev started to talk.
“Were so done..” He stopped as the ARC started to talk.
“Look, we have no choice, we need to work together down their.”
ARC-545 said “ARC-545 Ion reporting.”
“ARC-660 Telo reporting.” The other one said.
“ARC-567 Flail, reporting in sir.” The last one responded to that.
“You guys.. When we land.. move together, no one goes alone.” The jedi said to them all. He had his cloak on and a light saber in his hand, it wasn’t on, it was off, meaning no blade.
They felt the LAAT Land.
Everyone put their helmets on, only force knows what was waiting for them out there, on the planet.. The planet, Mustafar.