Light

[James Tariq Al-Mansour]

[Random song coming your way.]

I've been lost my whole life, searching for a purpose.
But I can't see, I'm engulfed in darkness.
Trapped in this abyss without hope, without light.
Just as I am about to give in I see you, I found my way.
I see the light.

Like the sun you light up my life.
Shine for me baby, you fill me up with hope.
I wanna feel your love, shining down on me.
Oh, Oh, Oh.
Light up my life baby. you lift me up above the clouds.
I promise I'll never let you go. No, No.
No I'll never let you go.

I think I found the one to light my path at last.
So I can run from my past.
I can't keep living in the dark.
I need you ignite the spark.
Set me free.

Like the sun you light up my life.
Shine for me baby, you fill me up with hope.
I wanna feel your love, shining down on me.
Oh, Oh, Oh.
Light up my life baby. you lift me up above the clouds.
I promise I'll never let you go. No, No.
No I'll never let you go.

You give me strength so I can fight.
You're the hope I've been searching for all this time.
Like a moth I was drawn to your light.
Shine down on me, I wanna feel your light!
Light!
Light!
I want to feel your LIGHT!
Light!
Light!
Light!
Fill me up with light!

[Comments? Critics? Bashing? Whatev?]

[Matrim Gallagher]

I like the chorus, I think I'd have to hear it to get the beat though. For instance...

I can't keep living in the dark.
I need you ignite the spark.

is there a pause between I need you/ignite the spark? Or could it be...

I can't keep living in the dark.
I need you to ignite the spark.

to give each of the lines an 8 count.

[James Tariq Al-Mansour]

Oh there was supposed to be "to ignite" I dunno how I missed that.

Maybe I should run my stuff through word before posting it here XD

[Matrim Gallagher]

hehe, maybe. I like it though, it'd be interesting to hear in a song or just reciting it live and stuff to get down all the rhythm of it.

[Sara Gallagher]

that's pretty good, you should get it on mic though or something to hear the rhythm and stuff you intended for it

[Matrim Gallagher]

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