Eliphas Rancros[W.I.P]

[Zelanoth Tellos]

Vitals

[/b] Eliphas Rancras
Nickname(s):none but goes by El sometimes
Age/Grade:Age:18 Grade12
Birthday: June 20th
Place of Birth:the Castle of cornelia hier to the throne, but he moved cause he hated almost everything about being heir, but the moneys
Ethnicity:Cornelian
Height:5"2(five foot 2)
Weight:110
Blood type:AB+
Hair Color: a nice white.
Eye Color: blue
Sexuality:straight
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Persona

[/b] This is one of two sections that staff will be hard on. Your character's personality is one of two things that can give other members a view of how your character is, so at the absolute minimum, you must give a basic rundown of your characters psyche. What are they like on the inside, caring people, cruel, slightly ambivalent, whatever, it's your character. You must write something for this that matches your history, considering personalities are forged by life experience. It must be at least 150 words.(ill modify when im done)
Mentality: somewhat crazy but only goes like that when fighting
Ideal:?
Belief:Eliphas believes in the Chaos gods(duur hes somewhat crazy)

Hobbies:Reading books, buggering with the computor of his, and playing on the computor of his, and training with martail arts and swordsmanship(has a plastic sword)
Talents:is a nice computor techy but also trains in both defensive and offensive martial arts
Favorite things:Computers and swords....Especially swords....*drools*
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Aesthetics

Combat

[/b]Eliphas Practices in the line type of combat system, he specializes in bringing the enemy down to his/her knees and finishing them off then he only uses this in specific combat conditions, otherwise Eliphas uses Defendo for defencive manuvers, and For offencive Eliphas uses okichitaw.
Years Practiced: Eliphas has gone through about 3 years of practice in every style
Description:The LINE system was designed to be executed within specific combat conditions: limited visibility, extreme mental and physical fatigue (while wearing full combat gear), when numerically inferior, and designed to cause death to the opponent. (taken from wikipedia )for defendo it is trying to defend from every attack which is based on Combato but is not lethal it is just for suppression(you check wikipedia)and for Okichitaw Eliphas finds the closes weapon and uses it, hopefully it is bladed(check wikipedia okichitaw and defendo cause i might miss something srry)
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History

[/b] This is the second section that staff will be hard on. Detail is the key, make it a good length, at the bare minimum, three full paragraphs. These must, at some point or another, detail your character's early childhood and home life (relevance to personality and other valuable information), your character's younger years and any such thing that encompasses the years approaching their current age. Describe important life events and such things, that helped shape who your character is today. The last part must be relevant to how your character ended up at Public High School 259.(i am currently working on ill modify when i am done)
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Living Status Information

[/b] Eliphas lives in a small house with a maid and butler who are very loyal it is like a mansion but not so obvious
Roommates: 1 maid and 1 butler who befriended Eliphas and unlike normal butlers and maids they are laid back.

Cases Against the Students: 0
Cases Against the Teachers: 0
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Placement	Item(s)
Head
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Earrings	N/A
Glasses	N/A
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Torso
Shirt	N/A
Jacket/Coat	N/A
Neck	N/A
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Arms
Arm	N/A
Wrist	N/A
Gloves	N/A
Ring	N/A
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Legs
Pants	N/A
Shin	N/A
Shoes	N/A
Belt	N/A
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Misc
1	N/A
2	N/A

Stats

[/b]20
Dexterity:10
Constitution:10
Intelligence:20
Wisdom:20
Charisma:10

The Bio Approval Code Phrase: "no i dont want to dance with the cookie"
Kay im changing this to eliphas which is a W.I.P k im working on it so dont rush me

[Tyr Odinson]

It's not bad, but i need some more info.

For one, i need more in the personality area- you only have a few things there, try and add a bit more so people can get a feel for who the guy is, how he reacts in certain situations and toward certain individuals.

Also, you don't have the bio approval code phrase- Read through the rules of the site, and once you got it put it in there.

Also, your history is a little confusing to me, perhaps you could try reading through it and making things a little clearer?