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Post by Lucas Delacroix on Jan 4, 2012 2:56:39 GMT -8
Yeah Fuck it. I actually would like some feedback, I know a few of you talk to me over personal messaging but there are a lot of you who don't for whatever reason. Shame on you. I'd just like a bit of feedback from my characters and am in a total reviewing mode of sorts.
Gabriel - Kinda flushed out already but whatever if you feel the need to comment on him go ahead. *shrugs*
Adam Silver
Jaus Valentine - HAHAHA Dead...
Lucas Delacroix
"Bel"
Rino Badoer - I know totally not active atm but hopefully will be.
Jamys Durand - Meh another inactive but potential revival
(I HAVE WAY TOO MANY CHARACTERS!!!)
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Post by Kevala Badoer on Jan 4, 2012 4:26:25 GMT -8
>.>
Okay so most of what I have had to say in the past I have discussed with you over MSN when it comes to your characters, though mostly it has involved Gabriel. So wont really dwell too much on him here. I am sure you know where I stand on my views concerning him and that I believe he is an amazing character, despite the whole "being an ass" thing. But again, that's just who he is and it works, even if it seems to light a fire under other people's asses on a regular basis.
Adam: I personally find Adam to be rather amusing. I enjoy reading his threads and I think that all around he is a good character. I do find that sometimes he can be a bit annoying, not so much as a result of that aspect of his character coming to light but more so due to the fact that he can, for the most part, become rather predictable. For me, I suppose that this bothers me because I personally expect more from you as a RPer. Not that he is a bad character, not at all. He is by far one of the more amusing characters on the board and one of my faves of yours, its just I think he is capable of more.
But, yeah...I know how fickle your muse is, and given how many characters you have, I can see it being hard to put that amount of effort into him to develop him beyond where he is now. Still, interested to see what happens with him.
Jaus: Yes, dead as dead can be. But he was a good character. A very good character. I enjoyed reading up on him, enjoyed the somewhat shy nature he got around girls and loved his determination and conviction when it came to things he believed in. Always the one to stand up for what was right, he was very much a good character to follow and I wish I could have seen him develop more.
Lucas: Hmm, okay now this one actually is a close second to my favorite character of yours. When I read his threads, I see just a small hint of that attitude that made Gabriel so great, but at the same time, I see so much more that takes Lucas down a different path all together.
Basically, you get that feel of power from him, like he commands attention and knows just how to go about it without being obvious. You can feel the manipulation to the point that when you RP with him, you are constantly guessing as to what he is really up to with pretty much any move.
His darker nature, and twisted sense of morals (at least thats the feel I have for him so far) make him somewhat scary to deal with and yet intriguing, the urge to keep RPing with him rather heavy. If for no other reason than to see what he is going to do next.
You somehow manage to take that typical "psychopathic" character that people in RP often strive to create and make it your own and make it good. He doesnt come across as cliche or typical, and these days I think that is a task in and of itself.
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Not to mention he is sexy as all hell.
Huh?
What?
<.<
ANYWAY!
I see Lucas as being that character that causes a stir wherever he goes. Much like Gabriel and yet very much in his own way...Something I think, is what makes your character so impressionable and memorable, and makes them stand out above others....Especially when such actions on your characters part tends to be held against them no matter where they go as well as you the RPer......( you know what I mean, no need to go into detail on that...All I will say on that matter is that I greatly respect you as RPer and I respect your characters due to this fact )....I also see much room for him to grow and the ability to go any which way.
Other Characters: Honestly I have not seen enough of the others to offer up a review just yet on them. I reserve the right though!
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