Destiny
Adept
Justice demands retribution.
Posts: 154
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Post by Destiny on Jul 10, 2013 15:45:36 GMT -8
Cain rears back, wiping his face furiously!
"I'm blinded!"
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Tobias Ross
Adept
Enigmatic Psycho
Posts: 100 
200x300 Avatar: http://img1.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spire3/29802103f2e10e74c0a902d5e87f03791332646729_full.jpg
Application: http://phs259.proboards.com/thread/8960/tobias-ross-wip?page=1&scrollTo=213625
OOC Name: Paul
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Post by Tobias Ross on Jul 11, 2013 11:07:08 GMT -8
OOC:
Tobias had yet to sway back forward and only leaded back a little more to allow the kick to pass harmlessly over his face. Shaking his head as he continued to smoke his pipe, Tobias leaned all the way back onto his right hand and kicked off to flip back away from both of the fighters.
It was a couple of bad habits that Tobias had that made him act like such. Against unknown fighters he never used his full power, only a little bit less than half and he took him time when calm to gauge their combat capabilities. Tobias landing a few feet away and tapped out the ashes from his pipe as he waited. This was a bit disappointing and the were making all the amateur mistakes. Maybe this fight will show them their errors and they could correct them. With his left hand behind his back, Tobias motioned for them to attack him and stood at the ready with his right hand out toward them. It seemed that he might not need to up the ante or even become vicious and fight dishonorably.
"Don't stop now. The only thing I have seen is the fact that you both seem to be easily distracted."
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Post by Lucien DeChain on Aug 27, 2013 20:56:11 GMT -8
Thread has been handed in.
Jamal-kun Jackson: 0 EXP. Posts are react/respond, with the exception of the opening, which was useless fluff and random confusing thoughts. In the future I'd like to see more immersive and descriptive writing. Also, in one of your posts, you used Destiny's name, even though it was never given.
Destiny: 0 EXP. Mostly the same as above. You're on the right track, and I'd genuinely like to see more writing from you. What I'd like is a shift in your style to include more introspective elements, and more description in body movements in fights.
Tobias Ross: +1 EXP. Though this fight was short and incomplete, your content was immersive and true to the character. Keep it up.
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